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Rich,
I love your concept of Pizza Delivery Guys vs Werewolves. I am not as enamored with your presentation. I am uncertain what audience you are addressing because I can see several different avenues of approach. I'm going to get mean here so you m…
James,
I just read this section of your fantasy/thriller/spy novel. As always, I applaud you for the diligence of putting that many words on paper. I also read Rich's comments. Starting off, we are on opposite sides of the table, almost to a scene.…
Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoy the essay/bio of Chia aka me in some retrospect. I have been working hard since i started to write that monster. If you read further on, you can tell that my skill improved because my constant dedication. It ma…
Christie,
Your energy and imagination continue to amaze me. You have a unique voice that is worth developing. Keep at it. --sue
oh, here is the slightly revised version of my essay with corrected errors. But you all can reread it again if you like.
Sue, I also enjoy reading yours and it was pleasurable, especially how the security officer was pleasantly annoying....i found that a nice break of humor and lightness. You have more experience in the matter of expressing yourself more than I but ex…
James said:And now for Christie:I have to say first, and please don't take this the wrong way, but this is a great improvement from the material we were critiquing on Saturday. If I can guess, you wrote that a couple of months ago. Your skills have…
And now for Christie:
I have to say first, and please don't take this the wrong way, but this is a great improvement from the material we were critiquing on Saturday. If I can guess, you wrote that a couple of months ago. Your skills have come a lo…
Just a few quick words, because I'm glad that you liked my idea enough to take the time and write it.
I enjoyed how you treated your chip like a physical object. It was a clever way to express yourself without dialogue.
Bonus points for using the…
I made a mistake so I am reposting and adding the doc at the same time but I loved James having a conversation with Kurt but mine is Chia with some bits of me lol trying to make her life like. Enjoy and Peace :) !!
Here's my effort. It will be good to see how different we all are. James, I'm so glad you came up with this idea! --sue
James,
Is this the place to post critique? Hope so, because that's what I'm doing. I enjoyed your exercise. Your use of language is good. Sets the tone for Kurt (I assume the reference is Vonnegut). I liked the dialogue. There was a crispness in the…
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Comment Wall (7 comments)
- At 4:03pm on June 27, 2009,
Stephan Loy said…
- Hey, there! How's it going, oh, since five hours ago? I'm just saying 'hi', making my new and perhaps not entirely expected presence know.
- At 9:03pm on April 30, 2009,
Serra said…
- yay its Sue!!!!!!! <3 <3 !!!!
- At 10:29am on April 15, 2009,
Emily Watson said… - vI just came across your profile in this network. I would like to extend an invitation to join Allvoices.com. It’s a citizen journalist site. We discuss, debate, post news and report news about everything under the sun. Allvoices also has an incentive program for writers and they can make money writing, earn up to $10,000 cash. Register at http://www.allvoices.com/journalism and start contributing.
- At 8:03pm on April 14, 2009,
James Waters AKA. NineSpeed said… - Hello jsue, welcome to the box.
- At 3:31pm on April 13, 2009,
Vic said… - Welcome to the Box!
- At 11:13am on April 13, 2009,
Charlie Bear said… - Go Colts!
Hey to you down in INDY! Spent 12 years down in Claremont and our first house was about a mile of the north end of the track. Race day was always a pain.
Welcome to the Box!
- At 10:47am on April 13, 2009,
Shai Adair said… - Welcome to The Writer's Box.
Cheers,
Shai
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