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Stephan Loy
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  • Indianapolis, IN
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Fiction, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction

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Read it and weep, my dear fellow NoNoWriMoths. I finish today at 18,275 words. Actually, I may get a few more in before bed. I think this puts me about three days ahead of schedule, which feels way good. I really wanted a surplus to draw from over...
November 8
Well, I'm going to bed for the night. Final count so far: 7,432.
November 3
Check it out: 3600 words and counting. All fuzzy here. About the only thing I started with was the basic theme, some nebulous in my head ideas for archetypes and the idea for the first chapter. I'm deep into chapter two now.
November 1
Day 1, 2400 words so far! Fun. I need to build up a buffer against possible shortfalls during the work week. Looking for 5000 words today. Wish me luck.
November 1
 

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Hello, fellow writers and artists! I'm happy to have discovered this place, thanks so much to the Indianapolis Writers Group. Who am I? Well, I'm newly-budded ambitious. I've written seven novels, but never had any published. A couple of almost got it situations, but almost doesn't fill the credits section of the query letter. For the last few years I've been practicing, building my craft. Now I'm actively seeking an agent and then, through them, a publisher for two of my more recent efforts. I seek information, camaraderie and tough critical analysis of my work, parts of which will find their ways onto these pages, and soon. If you'd like to be a help in that regard, that is, any of the above regards, by all means drop me a friend request. I'd like to say that I'm not weird, creepy or dangerous, but that's a matter of perspective. I will say I'm slow, so if I chase you, you'll probably get away.

Isis Wept is a fantasy novel centered on the living gods of Egypt, about 8000 years ago. It retells in dramatic form the tragic love story of Isis and Osiris, and the birth of the ancient kings. Osiris, the god of order and civilization, is betrayed and murdered by his chaotic brother Set, who steals Osiris's kingdom and Isis, his wife. Isis, the goddess of life, must escape captivity, search the world for her dead husband's body, then attempt to resurrect him, a task at the limit of her considerable power. Meantime, Set's act of fratricide unleashes a series of events that fractures the affinity between gods and men, pits immortal against immortal, and gives rise to the pharaohs who would thereafter rule Egypt. Or that's the idea. In the veins of Pauline Gedge and Sarah Isidore.

Last Days and Times postulates panic in 2012 as the world rushes toward apocalypse. Or so the gullible seem to believe. With fundamentalist Christians and magical thinkers of all stripes convinced the world will end in that year, a radio evangelist rises to prominence while promising salvation through him alone. Unknown to almost everyone, this prophet is a 2000-year-old Roman legate cursed by Christ himself to live and see the end times happen. Immortality has driven him mad, and he determines to force the apocalyptic prophesies of the Bible to fruition in a hope to end his tortured existence. Only one person can stop him, a disaffected Jewish girl with a hate-on for God, whom she blames for the handicap of her six-year-old autistic son. She's the last of a line of Jewish seers, a family gifted to see the work of God, no matter how beautiful, or how horrible. Urban fantasy, equal parts Tom Clancy and Stephen R. Donaldson.

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At 8:12am on August 5, 2009, Kylie W. said…
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my blog. And, you have shown me some very good points. I agree, strongly, on the club point. I participate in the National Junior Honor Society, AMICI (a community volunteer program) and am going to join Student Council this year. I've always been very worrysome over grades. Oh, and to answer your question, I live in the United States. Alabama to be exact. I go to a public school.
At 5:23pm on July 8, 2009, Tony Walker said…
Mea culpa. Of course it was Osiris' knob, and not Set's. That's what comes of reading Dennis Wheatley Black Magic stories at an early age! I think it was 'The Devil Rides Out' that had the 'Talisman of Set' as the McGuffin.

I stand corrected ...
At 1:13pm on July 7, 2009, Tony Walker said…
Stephan, your page would be far easier to read if it was black print on a white background.

As to your Egyptian writings - what happened to Set's todger?
At 4:05pm on July 3, 2009, Rich Wells said…
Thanks for the kind words on Dogfight. I didn't see them until right after I sent you the whole file. So send me a big chunk of something you've written, and I will gladly read and react!
At 9:27am on July 2, 2009, Mark P. Henderson said…
Hi Stephan - good to hear from you!

Mark.
At 5:51pm on June 30, 2009, Rianna said…
Welcome, Stephan, to the box. I hope you enjoy it here.
At 11:31am on June 30, 2009, Rich Wells said…
The cover for the space opera? I thought that was the picture with teh dude with the sword and the eye patch and the space shuttle. Because my computer wouldn't load the other picture. Only after I posted that comment, did I realize I had goofed AGAIN.

Damned internet....
At 1:38pm on June 29, 2009, Rich Wells said…
Honestly, buddy...there's nothing like a space pirate with a sword and an eyepatch to really make a novel/novel cover. Now, if only you could put a SKULL in there somewhere....
At 1:56pm on June 28, 2009, James said…
That's right! I Will swallow your soul!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DsgZ4JXXB8
At 1:35pm on June 28, 2009, Rich Wells said…
Wow! An artist to boot! I had no idea!

Hopefully you'll figure out the ins and outs of posting on here more quickly than I have. I've already botched up two messages--no, three!--and I've only been here about a week!

D'oh!

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The First 50: Isis Wept 1, part 2

This is the second part of chapter one. If you haven't seen the first part, go to my previous post.

Part 2 of Chapter 1, Isis Wept

Qebera returned home to the animated welcomes of four naked daughters. They accosted him with such delight that they almost toppled him into the sand. His only son, Hordedev, stood with Sanni back from the melee, just outside the front door of the family’s tiny hovel. All present bore the mark of their land: dark skin, lean bodies, and hollowed, tired eyes.… Continue

Posted on July 8, 2009 at 9:02am —

Stephan Loy

The First 50: Isis Wept 1

Okay, the query letter is out of the way (unless anyone wants to make further comment). Here is chapter one of Isis Wept. A few things to keep in mind. You can read it right here, and I've broken it into two easy to digest sections (the chapter is 7500 words long). You can read the whole thing and comment, or you can comment on each section as you read it. Again, no obligation here except to tell me what you really think.

For those who dislike reading on a web site (like me), you should be able… Continue

Posted on July 8, 2009 at 8:52am — 2 Comments

Stephan Loy

The First 50

The first fifty pages. That's what they ask for, the agents and publishers. It's the first fifty, or the… Continue

Posted on July 6, 2009 at 10:43am — 11 Comments

 
 

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