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Okay, you have something interesting here, and it's on the right lines to grab the reader. Personally (and please note this is subjective opinion!) I'd prune what you've written and be less explicit. For example, at the start I'd be inclined to cu...
17 hours ago
Sir Markus, my experience was totally different from Mari's, but the underlying principles are the same. (1) At some point, typically in the midst of a conversation (yes, that happened to me, too), you suddenly know you're meant for each other. (2...
17 hours ago
I've no wish to try to pre-empt Mari's reply; but as one who's read the novel twice, I wouldn't want any detail of it to be changed. (The mere fact that I have read it twice tells you my opinion of it!) The author is likely to have a different op...
on Wednesday
Just read this discussion - wonderful fun! I'd be inclined to add to the cast of characters a young, intense researcher (of either gender, or both) who will be baffled by the psychiatrist, terrified of the intern and teased unmercifully by the inm...
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For what it's worth, my experience is much like Mari's, except that I have to be ALONE when I find time to write - which is seldom. Unfortunately, ideas (good metaphors, promising plot developments, turns of phrase) often waken me at about 2.30 a....
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The ink marks, the cardboard box and the headache are all familiar by-products of novel-creation. But I was very entertained by the grammatical argument! I haven't had any similar experience because I have no one beside me while I write fiction - ...
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"Beaufort Falls" went through so many drafts it gives me a headache to even THINK about them. Last year I shredded a cardboard box of "drafts" that the cat had been using as his substitute clawing post. I still have 6 "Kinko" editions and since we...
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Mari - how many drafts? I mean, how many drafts were needed to make Beaufort Falls the excellent novel that now graces my bookshelves (and I trust many others), and how many are going to be needed for Road Trip? My own experience (for what it's w...
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Sir Markus, we await the attainment of your functional temperature with baited breath and cloven hoof.
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I agree with every word of this. I seldom had to smack my children; they were intelligent kids and words usually sufficed. But they knew exactly where the limits were, they were warned verbally if they stepped over the limits, and they knew the c...
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To answer your initial question - yes, it follows from part I. You may want to put a break (such as a row of asterisks) between the two parts, or maybe change some of the wording to alter the transition, but even as it stands it's pretty seamless....
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I have a muse with a nasty sense of humour, playing tricks such as awakening me at 2.48 a.m. with a neatly phrased sentence, a subtle metaphor, a previously unconsidered plot development - and then obliterating it from my memory some time around d...
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You've managed the ten year old child's POV convincingly and consistently. His half-accepting, half-questioning attitude is perfect for this story. Of course his understanding is limited, but he observes so much that we can see clearly through his...
November 29
Glad someone out there is making progress with WIP. I have a WNIP... :-(
November 29
Perhaps I can clarify this issue about the existence of God. A simple mathematical argument settles it. Consider the following puzzle: what are the chances of an event of probability p occurring at least once during 1/p trials? For example, roll ...
November 28
No invading or occupying force ever defeated Afghanistan. How many men did the USSR lose in Afghanistan before they were obliged to withdraw? The Afghans I've met are very proud of the fact that during the 19th and early 20th centuries they defeat...
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Fenella and the Magic Mirror: a spoof fairy-tale

A slightly revised version of this story - much enhanced by Charlotte Holley's illustrations - has just appeared as an e-publication by Gypsy Shadow Publishing (http://www.gypsyshadow.com/MarksExcerpts.html#Fenella). I posted the unrevised version as a blog here ages ago!

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Posted on October 31, 2009 at 4:43pm —

Mark P. Henderson

Shameless self-promotion: "Perilaus"

My novel Perilaus has had a number of stunning reviews, including three on the Amazon site (http://www.amazon.com/Perilaus-Mark-P-Henderson/dp/1606938126) from which the book can be purchased, two on the Barnes & Noble site (http://search.barnesandnoble.com/Perilaus/Mark-P-Henderson/e/9781606938126) from which ditto, one on Facebook... The book can also be purchased directly from the publisher (bookorder@aeg-online-store.com).

Here are some of the nice things that readers have said:-… Continue

Posted on September 20, 2009 at 5:21pm —

Mark P. Henderson

A practical joke that backfired

THIS TALE IS DISGRACEFUL AND NOT FOR THE SQUEAMISH

The anatomy dissecting room at medical school is an unsavoury place, not only because of the array of formalin-pickled cadavers in various stages of demolition that occupies the ranks and files of tables, but also because of the medical students who're doing the dissecting. They're young, most are living away from home for the first time, and - no matter how hard-working and dedicated - they're frivolous; especially the males. You trust… Continue

Posted on August 13, 2009 at 9:00am — 4 Comments

Mark P. Henderson

Fenella and the Magic Mirror: a spoof fairy-tale

Fenella and the Magic Mirror

Fenella was growing up – and up. Whenever her father took a holiday from jousting and fighting and returned to his castle, he’d glance at his elder daughter, shake his head and declare her Unsatisfactory. Her mother, Lady Geraldine, was in despair. Despair, of course, is the proper condition for a lady whose husband spends most of his life away from home, jousting and fighting.

“A damsel should be fair and delicate, like your dear sister Felicity,” sighed La… Continue

Posted on August 6, 2009 at 4:30pm — 6 Comments

Mark P. Henderson

Short story: Disappearing Act

DISAPPEARING ACT

By the time my friends and I had reached the age of eight or nine we’d become fascinated by the village allotments. We couldn’t get into them, so many of our fantasies involved doing so. Those allotments were barred from the world by a hedge so high that a galloping deer couldn’t have cleared it, and so thick and dense that a Centurion tank couldn’t have penetrated it. Nor could a mouse. The hedge was interrupted only by a single gate secured with a massive padlock, to w… Continue

Posted on June 29, 2009 at 11:47am — 4 Comments

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At 12:00pm on September 6, 2009, Brian L Porter said…
Hi Mark,

Thanks for your blog comment. I sincerely hope that when you do eventually get your copy of 'Legacy of the Ripper' it will live up to your expectations. I appreciate your kind words and hope you're having a great weekend.

Best regards

Brian
At 10:00am on August 25, 2009, David N Alderman said…
Thank you, Mark, for taking the time to check out some of my work. I appreciate the encouraging words you have given me regarding my writing. It's nice to hear what someone I barely know thinks of my work, whether good or bad, especially approaching the release of my novel. :)
At 5:15pm on August 17, 2009, Doville said…
I also love Byron, Shelley (with passion) and Coleridge! But I'm surprised you dislike Wordsworth, one of our best. I wrote a few small pieces of poetry that I haven't been able to find, but I will. At first, Wordsworth inspired me greatly, as well as Shelley. I think I got more inspiration from the earliest poets. But although I wrote some poetry, I never tried any for publishing, just as a pastime.
At 6:26am on August 17, 2009, Darden North, MD said…
Hi Mark,
Thanks for the welcome. Yes, I am still a full-time, practicing ob/gyn ... still deliver babies and enjoy every minute of it. If you do read some of my work, I'd love to hear back.
Best,
Darden
At 3:16pm on August 7, 2009, Mari Sloan said…
You HAVE to find THAT one!!!!!!!!!!!!
At 3:23pm on July 23, 2009, Shannon Lynette said…
Welcome to the box :)
At 8:34am on July 21, 2009, Brian L Porter said…
Good to hear from you again Mark. Thanks again, and I'll look forward to hearing what you think of the first two books.

Best regards

Brian
At 7:49am on July 21, 2009, Brian L Porter said…
Hello Mark,

Thanks for your very kind compliment on my blog. Nice to see another Brit here on the site too. You're right abouthte reviews of course, I believe it's not so much how many stars the book gets as what the reviewer actually says about it that really counts and can help convince people to buy the work. I hope if you do read the two ripper books, you enjoy them as much as others seem to have done. I've just begun work on the third and final part of the trilogy.

Best regards

Brian
At 12:57pm on July 9, 2009, Tony Walker said…
Good morning (well, it is here in Arizona) Mark,

I read the Times, Grauniad, Torygraph, and the Daily Wail every day online, so I'd say that I was pretty well up on what's occurring back in the old sod. Fred the Shred is yet another symptom of Britain's current malaise, which has been imported from the US of A - greed.

However, the UK still isn't as bad a system as here, where politicians would laugh at the miniscule amounts of money the MPs are fiddling. Despite protestations that the US is "envied by the world", the average American struggles to get by on piss-poor wages, and works far longer hours and has less annual holiday time than anywhere in Europe.

I know that the UK is in a pretty bad state, but it's still home. I've realized, after almost fifteen years here, that Americans, while very pleasant as individuals, are still ... foreigners, at least to me. You can take me out of England, but you can't take England out of me.

We'll be scouting around for somewhere to live (York or Scarborough) when we visit in late September.

www.tonywalkerbooks.com
At 5:03pm on July 8, 2009, Tony Walker said…
Hello Mark, and welcome. It's good to see a fellow Brit here at the WB - it adds a touch of culture and class!

I know Derbyshire, and the last time I was there was to visit the Tram Museum at Crich - is that anywhere near Glossop?

I'm a Yorkie myself, born in York, but lived in London for 25 years before moving to Arizona, where I live in genteel poverty. We (the Amazon Queen and I) plan to move back to the UK, as soon as we can sell our home in Scottsdale - damn this recession!

All the best,

Tony W

www.tonywalkerbooks.com
 
 

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