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Thanks for the advice. I've been a bit busy lately and currently trying to get over a bad cold, so haven't spent much time with my writing. It's taking me forever to get my story out exactly the way I want it. I know what I'm doing wrong, it's mor...
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I'm interested. I would suggest ending the next chapter slightly more suspenseful. Make the reader antsy about what comes net, not just ready for it. I also would like to know more about Janessa up front. Not necessarily great detail, but more tha...
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How did you hear about us? Please be specific.
From the Cold Coffee site
How would you classify your level of writing experience?
Beginner
Please list any other writer's forums you belong to
Cold Coffee, Book Masons, Aden Fisher
Please tell us (if any) your favorite writer's magazines or publications
Writer's Market, Writer's World. Writer's Forum
List your specialty genre(s) OR genre(s) you are interested in (fiction, horror, etc...)
fiction, paranormal and paranormal romance, horror,fantasy

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Chapter 1 Draft 1 Shadows of Chaos

I'm new to writing and was a bit shy about posting this. I'm looking for constructive critique to help me along here.

This is a paranormal romance about a young woman who, through a tragic accident, meets an un-likely hero: a were-cat from another dimension. Through a near-death experience, she gets a glimpse of his world, both the good and the bad about it. Seven years later, they are re-united and she must make a choice: To stay in her world and face the possibility of never seeing him again,… Continue

Posted on March 18, 2009 at 10:46am — 2 Comments

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The UnSeelie Court





We are the benevolent ones, The Un-Seelie Court.
We are the nightmares that wake you from your peaceful slumber,
the reason goose-flesh crawls up your spine, and the hairs on the nap of your neck stand on end.
We are that swift, shadowy glimpse you catch in the corner of your e… Continue

Posted on March 18, 2009 at 9:37am —

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At 7:06am on March 24, 2009, Shannon Lynette said…
Welcome to the box!

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At 10:50am on March 19, 2009, Jennifer Helen said…
I just came across your profile in this network. I would like to extend an invitation to join Allvoices.com. It’s a citizen journalist site. We discuss, debate, post news and report news about everything under the sun. Allvoices also has an incentive program for writers and they can make money writing, earn up to $10,000 cash. Register at http://www.allvoices.com/journalism and start contributing.
At 5:58pm on March 18, 2009, Charlie Bear said…
Welcome to the Box!
At 6:28pm on March 17, 2009, Vic said…
Welcome to the Box1
At 6:17pm on March 17, 2009, James Waters AKA. NineSpeed said…
Hello DuskRaven, welcome to the box.
 
 

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