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DuskRaven commented on DuskRaven's blog post 'Chapter 1 Draft 1 Shadows of Chaos'

Thanks for the advice. I've been a bit busy lately and currently trying to get over a bad cold, so haven't spent much time with my writing. It's taking me forever to get my story out exactly the way I want it. I know what I'm doing wrong, it's mor...

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Sir Markus Cross commented on DuskRaven's blog post 'Chapter 1 Draft 1 Shadows of Chaos'

I'm interested. I would suggest ending the next chapter slightly more suspenseful. Make the reader antsy about what comes net, not just ready for it. I also would like to know more about Janessa up front. Not necessarily great detail, but more tha...

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Chapter 1 Draft 1 Shadows of Chaos

I'm new to writing and was a bit shy about posting this. I'm looking for constructive critique to help me along here.

This is a paranormal romance about a young woman who, through a tragic accident, meets an un-likely hero: a were-cat from another dimension. Through a near-death experience, she gets a glimpse of his world, both the good and the bad about it. Seven years later, they are re-united and she must make a choice: To stay in her world and face the possibility of never seeing him again,… Continue

Posted on March 18, 2009 at 10:46am — 2 Comments

The UnSeelie Court

We are the benevolent ones, The Un-Seelie Court.
We are the nightmares that wake you from your peaceful slumber,
the reason goose-flesh crawls up your spine, and the hairs on the nap of your neck stand on end.
We are that swift, shadowy glimpse you catch in the corner of your e… Continue

Posted on March 18, 2009 at 9:37am —

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