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Jayne said, "Ah Tony, tis but the season to be giving?"
Maybe so, but may I make a comment on Jayne's comment? First, there should be a comma between "Ah" and "Tony". I also think it's custom to write "tis" as "'tis", if you can spot that teeny punctuation mark that's grown between the hedgerow of quotation marks. Finally, why the question mark ('query' to you colonials) at the end? Just asking ... As for Dana's explanation that it's a "Ning Thing". Should we not know who Ning is? Is Ning a faceless corporation, bent on world domination? Is Ning a fiendish plot designed to destroy our intellectual capabilities and bring us down to the level of teenage Twitterers and Starbucks coffee drinkers? I think we should be told.
Any daring investigative reporters out there?
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